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First Grade: Writing Sample 2

First Grade: Writing Sample 2

Context of writing

A first grade girl wrote this story. After reading William Steig’s Amos and Boris, students were prompted to write a story with an unlikely friendship between two animal characters.

What is this child able to do as a writer?

  • She has generated an idea for a story — characters (‘leprd selu’ and ‘penglen’), a setting (‘the wodr’), and a probem (‘sumtims leprd sele was in the wodre’).
  • She includes a title that tells what the story is about and sticks to that topic.
  • She experiments with punctuation (period and exclamation point).
First Grade: Writing Sample 2

What does this child need to learn next?

This student started with a problem — the penguin was afraid to go in the water with the leopard seal — but the problem does not have a very interesting solution. She writes that the penguin went into the water and they became friends. In addition, her picture does not include enough details to help the reader fill in the missing gaps. Providing this student with a story frame where she could pre-write with pictures or words may help her plan a more interesting solution to the problem.