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3rd Grade: Writing Sample 2: Transcript

Title: Pain Wars: Me and my big brother the pain.

Welcome to my life where everything I do is wrong. We fight a lot. We fight about stupid stuff. The pain thinks I am the painful one. Sometimes I want to ask him to play. NO! I say, "Why not"" He says, "because I don't want to play with a kindergartner." "I'm in third grade." "Whatever. Well you look like a midget." "Take that back." "No." "Why not?" "Because it is the truth." "Uh!" My brother is rude too. I even go to his football games and lacrosse games. My brother is mean to me. The End.

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