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1st Grade: Writing Sample 4 Transcript

Buffalo got lost. He tried to find a posse (really!). She looked and looked. Then she saw a cat. The cat helped her. But the cat said it is able to stomp. The dog helped. Then they got back home. They were so so happy. But when they got home no one was there because they were looking and looking. Then they came back home so so happy!!!!!! Then they were happy. They they wre so so so so so…happy happy happy…!!!!! They couldn't believe it. It was amazing!!! They were so surprised!!!! They were so so so so so so so… Happy !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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