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1st Grade: Writing Sample 3 Transcript

(First sentence unclear) A bullet went right past his ear. It fell down. It wiggled and wobbled. It couldn't get up. A snake helped it up. They were sad. "Thank you" said _____ "You're welcome!" Up the trail. I don't know. Then several sentences I can't decipher — something about snake was being captured to the zoo and the bird put him up. Blast! We're flying everywhere. The birds dodged the bullets. The others gave up. They went south again. The bird said goodbye with a ______.

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